माटी का लोंदा

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माटी का लोंदा था वो

भर अंजुरी में

स्नेह से अभिसिंचित कर 

नाज़ुक उंगलियों ने तराशा

मन की तपिश में पकाया

आँखों में बो दिए कुछ सलोने सपने

और

प्यार के रंगों से -सींच दिए प्राण |

एक अनजान आहट सी हुई

अचानक आँखें  टिमटिमाने लगी

चेहरा मुस्कुराने लगा

गाल सुर्ख हो उठे

खामोश नब्ज़ में हरकत हुई

श्वासों की गति मुखर हो उठी

हृदय स्पंदित हो उठा

और

हाथों में भी - स्पर्श की बैचनी थी |

अचानक सहम गई -दोपहर

घिरा घोर अँधियारा

उठा झंझावात

गरजे गहरे काले बादल

और

फूट पड़ा आसमान |

गीला हो-बिखर गया वो

आखिर

माटी का लोंदा ही तो था वो |

माटी का लोंदा- clod of clay, अंजुरी- दोनों हाथों को मिलाकर बनाई गई कटोरी जैसी आकृति ,

अभिसिंचित- सींचा गया , स्पंदित- धड़कता हुआ , झंझावात- तेज ओर उग्र हवा

मनोज मित्तल | 31 मई, 2025| नोएडा

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The poem "माटी का लोंदा" explores the theme of creation, nurturing, and the transient nature of existence. It begins with the imagery of a clay figure, symbolizing something that is crafted with care and love. The poem describes how the clay figure is formed with delicate fingers, suggesting a gentle and attentive process. It is imbued with warmth and affection, indicating that it is not just an object but a representation of emotions and dreams. The act of planting beautiful dreams in its eyes highlights the aspirations and hopes that are projected onto this creation. The infusion of colors of love into its essence suggests that the figure is alive with feelings and connections.

As the poem progresses, there is a sudden shift when an unknown sound is heard. This moment signifies awakening, as the eyes begin to twinkle, and the face starts to smile. The transformation is palpable, with cheeks flushing and a previously silent pulse now becoming active. This suggests a transition from inanimate to animate, portraying the essence of life being breathed into the creation. However, this moment of awakening is abruptly interrupted by a dark storm. The imagery of a sudden, overwhelming darkness and the chaos of a storm reflects the fragility of life and happiness. The storm symbolizes external forces that can disrupt the peace and beauty of existence. The clay figure, once vibrant and full of life, is rendered vulnerable in the face of such turmoil. In the end, the poem reiterates that the figure is merely a clay lump, emphasizing its inherent vulnerability and the transient nature of life.

The poem reflects on the fragile and transient nature of life, love, or perhaps a relationship—suggesting that no matter how carefully something is shaped and nurtured, it may still be undone by forces beyond control.

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